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in the forest, a blue hedgehog was walking between the foliage.il poor hedgehog was tired and hungry, had not eaten for days and did not sleep for fear of being rapt.il curly cobalt had emerald green eyes and face, arms and belly was peach, he continued on his way until he stopped in a huge lawn.
"I will relax here," he sat in the grass and fell asleep
at that time a real Carriage passed through the woods, away from the Carriage stopped hedgehog and the driver got out and opened the door and got a huge naga black streaked with red, blood red eyes, dark tan and chest hair white, the naga wore a crown on his head and armrests gold on the arm and asked left:
"Why are we stopping?"
"My king, we stopped to take a breath and let the horses rest but if you want to leave me ...."
"No, I'll do a tour, you keep the horses under control"
"yes my king!"
the driver leave his king, the king walked in the meadow and the hedgehog colbat asleep, the king approached and looked at the blue hedgehog.in that moment I opened my eyes and saw the huge naga in front of him , sonic drive in the red eyes but then shock following his head and tries to get away from the naga  but managed to take the poor hedgehog's arm and asked him:
"Why are you running away?"
"I ..... I ........ please do not hurt me!" Sonic shadow closed its eyes and moved closer to her face and whispered in the ear
"Why did I hurt you?"
Sonic blushed and was confused, I look at the red eyes of the naga, remained so for 5 minutes, then let the naga arm of the hedgehog and said:
"Was obliged to your house?"
"I have no house ....." Sonic flattened his ears and look down
"And your family?"
"I'm an orphan"
Shadow was frozen, I put a hand on his cheek sonic and forced him to watch it.
"I'm sorry ........"
"Do nothing ........" Sonic murmured
"So if you have no home nor family can take you to the castle with me!"
Sonic looked at him confused
"Do what?"
"You can be my personal slave"
Sonic smiled and said:
"Works for me!"
Shadow turned to the Carriage and went with him difianco hedgehog, Shadow had a huge smile on his face, 'I have a personal slave for curly sexy! him I might as well put a dress maid "shadow flushed.sonic to notice that he was blushing but said nothing, after they have entered the coach asked them shadow:
"What is your name?"
"Sonic, sonic the hedgehog"
"Pleasure, shadow, shadow the naga"
it's sonadow story!
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TrishaTheHedge Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Intresting!!
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AnimalAmelia16 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh cool!
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Filmographer
thanks
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AnimalAmelia16 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your Welcome!
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Aito-sonicfan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
aww this is so cute poor sonic no home no family and a orphan :( love it ^^
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
already, but the real pain comes after
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Aito-sonicfan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
really I haven't read it yet ^^;
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
really, the bad parts arrive in the coming chapters<img width="19" height="19" title="Sweating a little...">
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Aito-sonicfan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
oh no!!! I didn't read it yet and I really want to know
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
I am happy that you are interested, but I will continue to read your story
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Aito-sonicfan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
oh really okay ^^
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x723 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Che carinooo!! <3 Per˛ Ŕ sempre la solita solfa, anche un'altra persona mi aveva fatto leggere una sua storia sempre ambientato nel medioevo. XD Dovresti ambientarlo nel mondo reale di Sonic.
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Filmographer
in che senso?,per˛ Ŕ da un p˛ che nn ti sentivo,adesso so che nn sei morta XD
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x723 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Come in che senso?! XD Nel senso che dovresti cambiare la storia Ŕ giÓ risentita su risentita, a me piacciono le storie originali. ^^
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Filmographer
nn ti seguo,intendi cambiare la trama?intendi di mettere qualcosa di innaspettato invece delle solite smancierie?
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x723 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
PerchŔ no? La mia storia di Megaman X, di cui sto pure facendo il fumetto, non inizia SUBITO con le smancerie, anzý! La parte in cui X e Zero si dichiarano Ŕ a metÓ storia (e le pagine sono 36) o.O. (Ti ho fatto un esempio)
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Filmographer
ok,cercher˛ di accontertarti,per˛ sarÓ un p˛ difficile perchŔ altre persone mi chiedono di cambiare/aggiungere altri pezzi,io pensavo che Ŕ solo lo scrittore che decide come va la trama del suo racconto(nn ti sto accusando o cosa)
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x723 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
La gente ti da consigli non ti forza! XD Sei tu a decidere cosa mettere ma ovviamente devi stare anche attenta a cosa metti perchŔ tu lo fai per il pubblico non per te stessa. XD
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Filmographer
Ŕ vero ma....vorrei capire cosa potrebbe piacere alla gente ._.
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SonicX-JB Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it and it's great!!! More please !
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
thanks, I'm working on but I think you have to wait a little longer, on the 27th I'll have my review and I will be free after :D
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Sonicloverforever98 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow this is awsome. Please continue!!! :-)
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Filmographer
continue but I haven't more ideas XD
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Sonicloverforever98 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student General Artist
But please continue it ok? I really like it so much and may can Fleetway appears in your story?
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Filmographer
yes, there might be, I had scheduled a battle between sonadow and sonourge and Fleetway ...... with those who have to stay?
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Sonicloverforever98 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Hm I don't really understand your question? Do you ask me what for caracters also will appear in your story? Sorry I'm bad in English...but I like your idea with the fight of Sonadow vs Sonourge vs Fleetonic!:-)
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Filmographer
precisely, you must be a good idea?
p.s:i'm italian
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cuteitachilove Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
Lovely
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student Filmographer
THANKS but do not know how to continue it
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cuteitachilove Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
Whatever you do i know its going to be awsome
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Filmographer
aaw thank!you make me blush
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cuteitachilove Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Anything to make my friend happy
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Student Filmographer
aaw you are so sweet!!
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cuteitachilove Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Thanks
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Student Filmographer
your welcome :D
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KittyLove657 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm very sorry, but I can barely understand this. The grammer is very poor...
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Filmographer
I'm sorry, but I'm Italian and my translator does not translate well (from Italian to English).....
:(
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KittyLove657 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh... you're Italian? Well then, very sorry, forgive me
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Student Filmographer
no damage ^^
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KittyLove657 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
kk :I
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Sonadowfire Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student General Artist
that's okay but i do amite it put a picture through my head
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Filmographer
sorry but I did not understand what you mean
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Sonadowfire Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student General Artist
nothign really you did a great job
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Filmographer
in this case, thanks:bow:
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Sonadowfire Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem
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shadangel98 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Student Filmographer
thanks!:blownose:
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KaixShadow Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:clap: good job :iconthumbsupplz:
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