in the forest, a blue hedgehog was walking between the foliage.il poor hedgehog was tired and hungry, had not eaten for days and did not sleep for fear of being rapt.il curly cobalt had emerald green eyes and face, arms and belly was peach, he continued on his way until he stopped in a huge lawn.
"I will relax here," he sat in the grass and fell asleep
at that time a real Carriage passed through the woods, away from the Carriage stopped hedgehog and the driver got out and opened the door and got a huge naga black streaked with red, blood red eyes, dark tan and chest hair white, the naga wore a crown on his head and armrests gold on the arm and asked left:
"Why are we stopping?"
"My king, we stopped to take a breath and let the horses rest but if you want to leave me ...."
"No, I'll do a tour, you keep the horses under control"
"yes my king!"
the driver leave his king, the king walked in the meadow and the hedgehog colbat asleep, the king approached and looked at the blue hedgehog.in that moment I opened my eyes and saw the huge naga in front of him , sonic drive in the red eyes but then shock following his head and tries to get away from the naga but managed to take the poor hedgehog's arm and asked him:
"Why are you running away?"
"I ..... I ........ please do not hurt me!" Sonic shadow closed its eyes and moved closer to her face and whispered in the ear
"Why did I hurt you?"
Sonic blushed and was confused, I look at the red eyes of the naga, remained so for 5 minutes, then let the naga arm of the hedgehog and said:
"Was obliged to your house?"
"I have no house ....." Sonic flattened his ears and look down
"And your family?"
"I'm an orphan"
Shadow was frozen, I put a hand on his cheek sonic and forced him to watch it.
"I'm sorry ........"
"Do nothing ........" Sonic murmured
"So if you have no home nor family can take you to the castle with me!"
Sonic looked at him confused
"You can be my personal slave"
Sonic smiled and said:
"Works for me!"
Shadow turned to the Carriage and went with him difianco hedgehog, Shadow had a huge smile on his face, 'I have a personal slave for curly sexy! him I might as well put a dress maid "shadow flushed.sonic to notice that he was blushing but said nothing, after they have entered the coach asked them shadow:
"What is your name?"
"Sonic, sonic the hedgehog"
"Pleasure, shadow, shadow the naga"
it's sonadow story!
aww this is so cute poor sonic no home no family and a orphan love it ^^
already, but the real pain comes after
really I haven't read it yet
Che carinooo!! <3 Per˛ Ŕ sempre la solita solfa, anche un'altra persona mi aveva fatto leggere una sua storia sempre ambientato nel medioevo. XD Dovresti ambientarlo nel mondo reale di Sonic.
in che senso?,per˛ Ŕ da un p˛ che nn ti sentivo,adesso so che nn sei morta XD
Come in che senso?! XD Nel senso che dovresti cambiare la storia Ŕ giÓ risentita su risentita, a me piacciono le storie originali. ^^
nn ti seguo,intendi cambiare la trama?intendi di mettere qualcosa di innaspettato invece delle solite smancierie?
PerchŔ no? La mia storia di Megaman X, di cui sto pure facendo il fumetto, non inizia SUBITO con le smancerie, anzý! La parte in cui X e Zero si dichiarano Ŕ a metÓ storia (e le pagine sono 36) o.O. (Ti ho fatto un esempio)
ok,cercher˛ di accontertarti,per˛ sarÓ un p˛ difficile perchŔ altre persone mi chiedono di cambiare/aggiungere altri pezzi,io pensavo che Ŕ solo lo scrittore che decide come va la trama del suo racconto(nn ti sto accusando o cosa)
I love it and it's great!!! More please !
thanks, I'm working on but I think you have to wait a little longer, on the 27th I'll have my review and I will be free after
Wow this is awsome. Please continue!!!
continue but I haven't more ideas XD
But please continue it ok? I really like it so much and may can Fleetway appears in your story?
yes, there might be, I had scheduled a battle between sonadow and sonourge and Fleetway ...... with those who have to stay?
THANKS but do not know how to continue it
I'm very sorry, but I can barely understand this. The grammer is very poor...
I'm sorry, but I'm Italian and my translator does not translate well (from Italian to English).....
that's okay but i do amite it put a picture through my head
sorry but I did not understand what you mean